The silence of a falling star
Lights up a purple sky
And as I wonder where you are
I'm so lonesome I could cry...
The unrelenting monsoon rains
Create streams that flow by
And as I wonder where you are
I'm so lonesome I could cry...
Leaves fall gently from trees
In the wind, hither-tither they fly
And as I wonder where you are
I'm so lonesome I could cry...
I sit by my window, a silent spectator,
On my bed, under blankets, warm & dry
And as I wonder where you are
I'm so lonesome I could cry...
P.S. a Lil Borrowed - a Lot Original
P.P.S. My first attempt @ poetry
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pretty impressive poetry 4 a first timer i must say...
nEvEr knEw mY fRnD hAd tHis HiddEn TalEnt hIddeN in HEr ;).. NiCe WoRk Krits!
I sit on my chair,in front of the monitor,
like a silent visitor, visitin all d blogs
On dis day,i was left spellbound reading ur poem
And I still wonder, are u still there..!!
Wow.. what an attempt.. keep going.. and be right there !!!
Good in a surprising way.
I am betting the next poem will come like.. 6 years later :O
Oh My God!!!
That was breathtaking!!!
Loved it. Beautiful. Keep it up Rambo.
Niice!!
shapaaaaa..mudiliye pa . thangave mudiliye .. TOO GOOD A POEM .I was always of the opinion that you put a lot of mookai only , but this is a different attempt altogether .GOOD LUCK.Keep up the good work . anyways poem was awesome .Do some creative work like this :P :P
WoDeRfUlL!!!!!!!!!!!!
gr8 job done...if this is d 1st attempt i nt only hope bt m sure tht i'll get gud ones 2 read in future. keep it up!
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